up at four
out the door
before five
rushing drive
plane at six
check in quick
eat at seven
up in heaven
land at eight
taxi wait
arrive at nine
I feel fine
Inspired by David. Go read his poetry, it’s much, much better than mine.
PS: Let me know if you would like me to send you an email. Then you can tell your grandkids that you once had an electronic conversation with somebody who knew David before he was famous.
Comments
How embarrassment!
I like your poem, except the "I feel fine" bit is totally unfounded in fact. "Swift decline" would have been more realistic. Many thanks for your gracious plugging of my poem.